I wished that I’d washed my pants. I wondered if everyone else in the class could smell me. The thought made me squirm with self-consciousness. My armpits were sticky and my forearms had the fiberglass itch. I felt her looking my way, surreptitiously inviting me to flirt, and I willfully ignored her, tenderly probing my hollow molar with the tip of my tongue.
The class was arraigned in a loose semicircle: seven tables and fifteen chairs facing a dry-erase board where the hapless teacher was once again sketching out the arc of a storyline.
The fat girl always made sure that she sat opposite me. This time she was wearing a lacey black button-down top that threatened to burst open under the pressure exerted by her hefty breasts. She was wearing a red mini-skirt, and under that (she made sure I knew) flame-red panties.
I slipped up and made eye contact, and she giggled and grinned victoriously. My traitorous penis twitched involuntarily inside my stained and torn work jeans.
She couldn’t have been much older than 25 or so; and she might have been as young as 19. She seemed gloriously unaware how uncomfortable her stories made everyone else in the class -- up to and including the poor teacher-- when she read them aloud in that raspy, husky, ‘I’m reading literature’ voice of hers.
It was a fiction writing class, and she wrote erotica. Nothing but erotica. Really, really strenuously bad erotica, complete with run-on sentences, dangling participles, swollen bosoms and throbbing manhoods. Lately her stories had taken a turn for the worse – and the more explicit – featuring glowering daddies with studded leather belts and ten-inch dicks and a penchant for golden showers. And for the last three weeks she had been following me home.
She was going to read again tonight. We all knew it and we all dreaded it. This story was about an erotic dream she’d had in which a man was suckling at her breast. When she woke up, it wasn’t a man at all but Fifi, her little black and white Pekinese licking her nipple. The whole class was appalled, but only I knew that the story had been written exclusively for me.
She sat smiling, oblivious to the stunned silence that followed her reading. While the teacher tactfully tried to suggest that she branch out to other areas of fiction, she leered at me and once again flashed me her Satan-red panties.
I thought I had lost her, but then I saw her in the next car back on the #7 train, furiously scribbling into her wire-bound notebook.
When the train stopped at my station Hunter’s Point, I sprinted up the stairs and ducked into the corner bodega. The South Asian shopkeeper looked at me with distaste, but sold me two cans of SPUR caffeinated malt liquor beverage. He disdainfully counted out my greasy and crumpled singles as I popped one of the cans and took a long swig of noxious alcoholic Kool-Aid. The panic attack that had been building up inside me like a Midwestern thunderstorm abated slightly. Clutching the unopened can to my chest like a swaddled infant, I ventured back out onto the street.
Such a miniskirt should be illegal. Maybe it is, in Kansas or Mississippi or some joint like that. She had to be sporting a dozen acres of pink, bare skin, thighs that went on for whole city blocks, fields of glistening gelatinous vein-mottled flesh unflatteringly lit in the cold hard light of mercury vapor street lights.
She was about half a block behind me and I knew that tonight I was going to invite her up to my apartment. A wave of exhaustion and despair washed over me, and I sat wearily down on the stoop. She took her place next to me, and I was overcome with the deep crushing sadness of a fat woman in a skinny woman’s world.
I cracked the second can and we sat quietly drinking together for a while under the moonless sky while low clouds raced from horizon to horizon.
END
First published in Ugly Cousin May 2009
Wednesday, January 27, 2010
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
New Story UP!
Hey loyal readers! I have a brand-new story up (as of May 13) at the fan-freaking-tastic web journal thingy Ugly Cousin. The title of my story is "You Must Change Your Life"
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Read and Enjoy!
LC
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LC
Monday, February 23, 2009
El Rey Del Taco
The new century was young and green, internet IPO’s were the bees’ knees, and the radical Islamists had not yet re-invented the smart bomb.I was living in Brooklyn at the time. I had a second-hand laptop, an illegal apartment in a converted factory space, and a fairly non-sucky job as a high-rise window washer.
Almost overnight, my neighborhood became trendy. A Starbucks sprang up next door, eventually running the Crazy Coffee Lady out of business, and the Mother Superior Bar and Grill raised the price of a pint to 6 bucks.
Julian was my upstairs neighbor. He had an entire cavernous loft space to himself, not just because he could afford it so much as because it was the cool thing to do.
Julian had invested in New Technology, and he had gotten in early. Julian was a millionaire on paper. We were hanging out at the bar over at the Mother Superior. I really couldn’t stand Julian, but Julian was buying the drinks.
“Do you know what the difference is between me and you?”
Why yes Julian, I sure do. You’re rich and I’m broke. “What’s the difference?”
“I’ve got ambition. I’ve got drive. I get shit done. While you were wasting your time going to college,” Julian paused and took a swallow of his beer. Budweiser. I was drinking Brooklyn Brown. “While you were wasting your time in school, I was working the market. Investing. Investing in the future, my man.” Pretentious Prick.
Julian ordered sushi for delivery on a daily basis. Julian owned two bicycles: a road bike and a mountain bike, neither of which I’d never seen him ride. Either one would have set me back a full paycheck, and I get paid bi-weekly. Julian had to bribe his scumbag neighbors with free beer to sit around and listen to his monologue.
He was telling me about how he had hired a guide service to take him rock climbing. It was a story I’d heard before.
“Those people are all idiots. I can’t believe people actually pay good money to risk their lives like that. I can’t believe rock climbing is supposed to be trendy these days.” He shook his head, “What a stupid fad.”
I shook my head noncommittally. My pint glass was almost empty.
“It’s not like I’m actually scared of heights,” he said, signaling the barkeep to bring us two more. “It’s the falling I’m afraid of,” he lowered his voice confidentially; “it’s the landing that’ll do ya. So I’m afraid of death. So sue me.”
Suing people wasn’t really my style. And anyway, it would have been a waste of time. I’d just spent a long day on a motorized scaffold, freezing my ass off while I squeegeed windows. Chuy, my partner, had gotten back on the heroin and managed to drop a five-gallon bucket of soapy water from 46 stories up, and nearly gotten us both fired. All I wanted was a change of clothes, pizza, beer, and pornography.
I ran into Julian three days later, coming home from work. He was sitting in the stairwell, just above my front door, looking unusually despondent. He clearly wanted someone to talk to. I didn’t particularly feel like listening to him go on and on about whatever his yuppie woes happened to be that day, but he looked so miserable and downtrodden that I felt like I had to ask him what was on his mind.
The bubble had burst.
“I’m broke.” He said, shaking his head, “I’m broke. I’ve lost everything.” He plopped down heavily on my futon couch, still shaking his head, folded copy of the Times still dangling limply from his hand. “Everything. Dude, I won’t even be able to make rent.”
“Don’t worry Julian,” I said with a reassuring smile, “I can get you a job.” I popped open a beer and handed him one. “Working with me.”
There was a stiff cold wind blowing in off the Hudson. I had to help Julian with his harness. He was shaking, and it wasn’t just from the cold. We stepped onto the motorized platform, and I attached his lanyard. I double-checked my own harness, flashed Julian a smile, and pushed the start button. The scaffold lurched as we lifted off the ground, sloshing soapy water out of our collection of five gallon buckets. Six inches of the ground, I waited for the deck to stabilize a little before running us all the way up. We were supposed to be starting on the fiftieth floor, and working our way down from there. It would take a good twenty minutes to get up to our high point. I pressed the UP button on the onboard winch with one finger while I sipped hot coffee from the spill-proof mug I held in my other hand. Julian was gripping the handrail with both hands.
The machine cranked us slowly upward. I kept my thumb on the UP button, and sipped my coffee. Office drones inside, just starting their workweek, pointedly ignored us. “Please stop a second.” Julian said from his end of the platform. I pretended not to hear him. His puffy face was pale and streaked in sweat.
“Oh God. Stop. Please Stop It.” We passed the eleventh floor. We were probably a hundred feet above the little rectangle of caution tape that marked out our footprint on the sidewalk. Julian was down on his knees, clinging to the edges of our plank.
“Dude, it’s only 37 more stories.”
He looked up at me, still gripping the scaffold with both hands. Tears were running down his cheeks, “I can’t do this,” he said, “Please just let me down.”
I may be a dick, but I’m not that big of a dick. I ran the lift back down to the sidewalk, and helped him out of his harness. He didn’t say much to me, just wiped his nose on his shirtsleeve, turned his back and walked away. A defeated man.
Three months later, I saw Julian working at the Taco Mobile. I swung by the converted bus to grab a couple of tacos, and there he was behind the counter, towering over the Mexicans, wearing a chorizo-spattered white apron. He smiled when he saw me, and shook my hand, and piled extra guacamole on my tacos. “No charge for an old friend,” he said, and I tipped him generously.
By the end of the year, Julian owned the Taco Mobile. You know why? Because Julian had ambition. He had drive. And his tacos were delicious.
End
(c) 2009 first published Spindle Magazine, 2/09
Spindle
Thursday, January 8, 2009
Overclocked
I got the worst fucking luck.
The downtown local broke onto the subway platform like a rogue wave, and I was nearly pulled under by the rip tide. I wrapped an arm around an upright steel column, encrusted in decades of tough, brightly colored institutional paint. Someone had started an archeological excavation, exposing a multitude of layers, geological strata, millimeters deep and no sign of the naked underlying steel. Like a coward I crouched in the lee, waiting for the surge to pass. About the only thing I had going for me was that I was headed opposite the commuters on their way to work.
Sometimes I believe I live inside a giant pachinko machine, I swear. I couldn’t decide if it was way too early in the morning or way too late at night.
I felt shaky. Nauseous. Like a shadow on a cloudy day. Too much coffee, my stomach twisted in knots in protest; and the numbing effect of the alcohol was beginning to morph into a splitting headache. I wanted methamphetamines. I wanted valium. I wanted to eat a mile of pussy. I was still technically on the clock.
On a stainless steel edge, I smoothed a crumpled twenty that had until recently lived a solitary existence in the bottom of my blue jeans. I fed it into the slot, and shockingly, the machine accepted it on the first try.
‘Would you like to add money to your MetroCard?’ No. I didn’t have a MetroCard. I wanted to get one. That was the problem. The solution, however, didn’t seem to be revealed on the touch screen. I hit Cancel. ‘How may I help you today?’ No sign of my twenty. ‘Please insert credit card or cash to begin.’ I looked around. The token booth, encased in inch thick plexi, stood empty. ‘Thank you for riding with MTA.’
More Trouble Ahead.
It was going to be a long walk. For a minute I just stood there, looking at the thing. I swear, if a machine could look smug, this one did. I considered digging my ten-inch crescent wrench out of my tool bag and doing a number on its smug little touch screen, but frankly I didn’t have the energy. I sighed, probably too loud and too dramatically, and headed up the urine steps into the morning sun.
Technically I was still on the clock. Technically I should have still been at the bottom of a very deep pit in a very tall building on the walkie-talkie with Joe Blow, trying to dial in load sensors whose manufacture and installation had been botched twenty years ago by a company out of Ohio that no longer existed; but then technically I’m not supposed to drink whiskey at work either and that’s never stopped me, now has it? Seven hours of this shit is more than enough for anyone, certainly more than enough for Joe and me, and the rats in my peripheral vision give me the fucking creeps, and who really gives a shit if we cut out a little early. Not me.
Fuck this, man. It was kind of weird to be out and about this early in the morning. The light was strange. I had this strong paranoid feeling that I was being watched, but I chalked it up caffeine, amphetamine withdrawal and general paranoia. I checked over my shoulder a couple of times nonetheless. Hey, you can’t be too careful. An ounce of prevention is worth a pig in a poke, or something like that.
I picked up the mail on the way up to the apartment. Crap, whole lotta crap. Doctors Without Borders wanted more money. Man, you write them one lousy check and they never leave you alone. What else? Another rejection slip. A cd in a cardboard mailer for Nate. He’d been getting a ton of those lately. The ConEd bill. Christ on a flipping crutch!
“Hey Nate?” If there is one thing I really really cannot stand, will do almost anything to avoid, it is conflict. My share of the electric bill, however, even considering our 60/40 split, currently represented more than the sum of my total liquid assets, and rent was coming due again.
Nate poked his head out of his bedroom. Actually what we call his bedroom is just a sheet of half-inch plywood drywall-screwed into the far end of our railroad studio. It is a bedroom in that it encompasses just enough space for Nate’s futon and in that he sleeps in there. Not that I’ve ever actually known him to sleep.
“The electric bill just came in. It’s for over 900 dollars.” Our power bill had been creeping up for months now. Nate just looked at me. His eyes seemed wobbly. Or maybe it was just me, just that I hadn’t slept in a really really really long time. “And I can’t afford it.”
He blinked, slowly, like a sick and twisted Disney version of an owl. Nate is ridiculously tall, six-four or six-seven or something and has horrible posture and greasy black hair that he neglects to cut. So why does he always remind me of an owl? Maybe it’s the nose. “Don’t worry about it.” he said, “I’ll take care of it.”
“All of it?”
“All of it. Give me the bill. I’ll write them a check.”
Wow, big spender. I handed over the bill. “This came for you too.” I said, passing him the cardboard cd packet.
“Cool.” Nate said, but he was no longer interested in me. He was already loading the cd into the one computer he owns that actually has a cd drive. A couple dozen fans kicked in as sleeping integrated circuits grouchily blinked the cobwebs out of their collective eyes and shook an electronic leg. A nearly subsonic 60-cycle hum grated on my eardrums, and the temperature in the apartment edged up a degree or two.
Over the months, our apartment had been engulfed by a crawling infestation: what might appear to an uneducated layman (i.e. me) to be dozens of crappy old PCs, stripped of their cases and peripherals; and wired together with red, blue, yellow, and green jumper cables. For a while Nate had been paying me (twenty bucks a pop, cash) to pick them up off the street for him, old computers that people were throwing away. Where he gets the money, I have no idea, because he certainly doesn’t have a job and hardly ever leaves the apartment. He is some kind of computer genius- he fixed my pokey old Powerbook up real good, runs faster than brand new now- but we don’t even have our own internet connection. We steal internet (via a homemade tin can high-gain antenna that Nate cooked up from some recipe off the interweb) from the Crazy Lady Coffee Shop across the street that is going to be closed soon because a Starbuck’s just opened up on our block. Nate is clearly a little crazy, but quite frankly that’s the kettle calling the pot black.
It was only ten, but sometimes Daisy can be convinced to open the Good Times a little early; so I took my rejection slip and girded my loins for a nice long wallow. Daisy is a friend, and also happens to be my valium supply, and when she’s in a good mood I can drink for free or half price. And I like looking at her tits. I hadn’t been properly laid in a really long time, and the tension between my legs achieved some kind of cranky equilibrium with the tension between my ears. I really needed to score some meth and do some writing. And now I had an erection.
Honestly, I never do speed at work. I only use it to help me write. Nights I’m an elevator mechanic, days I’m a novelist. Or at least a short story writer. A thus far unpublished short story writer. And I need the valium to mellow out the meth; otherwise I get too jittery.
Daisy was behind the bar, polishing the greasy wood surface with a greasy rag in an earnest display of the futility of the protestant work ethic. The steel gates were still down, but she let me in and set me up with a can of PBR and a shot that took some of the edge off. I told her the story of the thieving MetroCard machine, and she shook her head in sympathy, but didn’t offer me any free Product, so I had to be content to watch her cleavage which jiggled pleasantly under the cut-out collar of a black Iron Maiden t-shirt. Daisy’s got a bit of a gut, but frankly I didn’t really mind that at all. What she has got is a really cute set of tits that I wouldn’t mind having a closer look at if it weren’t for that damn ring on that damn finger of her left hand. I wouldn’t mind, not one bit.
Feeling sufficiently insulated, or just fatalistic, I tore open the rejection slip. It was from one of your more pretentious literary journals, a story I had sent in months and months ago, and more or less given up on every hearing back on.
Is it possible to hallucinate a complete page of text? I think that it probably is; and my head was in the kind of state that I assumed that was exactly what was going on. Holy shit. I killed my PBR and reread the letter that wasn’t even a form letter.
My rejection slip wasn’t. It was a congratulatory note, an acceptance letter. I read it again. Foie Gras Journal was happy to publish my fresh and wryly humorous piece. There was to be no payment of course, not even a complimentary issue, cocksuckers, but still. I realized that I was grinning. Daisy landed another ice cold can in front of me, and I slapped five dollars down on the bar. She looked surprised.
“I just got published,” I explained, unable to wipe the big goofy grin off my face.
“Congratulations,” she deadpanned, pocketing the five. “When? Where?”
I scanned the letter for a date. Over a month ago. Slackers. But that meant that the current issue, the only issue that mattered, my issue, should already be out.
“I’ve got to go,” I said, standing up and taking a big cold fizzy swallow of beer. And then on impulse: “Hey, what are you doing later on, after you get off work?”
She looked at me a little funny. “I don’t know. Depends.”
“Do you want to come over to my house?” I felt hot and realized that I was blushing. I’ve always sucked at asking girls out. As a matter of fact, I can’t remember the last time I actually asked a girl out. Possibly in junior high school. The deepest pit in hell, half the reason I’m so freaking maladjusted. “Like, do you want to come over and hang out?” I sounded like a complete asshole.
“I don’t know… if my husband found out…”
“What time is your shift over?”
“Nine.”
“Do you want to meet me over there?”
“Sure.”
I gave her our address and left, feeling like I’d just robbed a bank. Nobody ever told me it was THAT easy!
I was headed up to the St. Mark’s bookstore, the best and only place I know of to get obscure pretentious literary journals. On the way over, some yuppie woman gave me the evil eye for flicking my cigarette butt onto the sidewalk, and I gave her such a look that she stopped in mid scold and took a step backward. I was King of the World.
Made my way to the rack in the back where they sell the indie rags. It took me a minute to locate it, but there it was, the latest issue of Foie Gras; shiny and new. I can’t believe they didn’t even give me a free copy. Cheap fucks. I ponied up my thirteen bucks (thirteen bucks?!) and hit the street.
As I worked my way south and east, I flipped through the magazine. There I was, right there in the table of contents, my name in somebody else’s ten point black Helvetica. Of course they had mangled the title, but whatever. I paged through the journal (I can’t believe the crap they publish) not wanting, I suppose, to appear too eager to get to my own story. (Appear to whom? I have really got to get some sleep.) About midway through, there it was, next to a poem about a boyfriend some chick had had when she had been a councilor at some summer camp. I pulled up to a convenient standpipe and started to read:
Dear Douchebags,
My hands are shaking with disgust, making it hard to type. Your pathetic excuse for a lame-ass fucking joke of a so-called literary journal fucking blows. It is literally worthless: I wiped my ass with it and got a fucking paper cut. I can’t believe you so-called editors are wasting perfectly good air with your pathetic respiration. Why don’t you do humanity a favor and donate your fucking worthless organs to charity? I mean there are poor villages in Guatemala that could use your shriveled undersized testicles and livers. Give me a fucking break…
And so on, for almost four pages. I realized as I read the first sentence that this was not the story I had sent them something like nine months ago: this was the follow-up letter I had sent them after not hearing back from them at all after six months. I’d just banged it out and dumped it in the mail. I’d never even worked up a second draft. Reading it critically now, I wondered if maybe I shouldn’t back off a tad on the methamphetamines when writing. “Goddamn prepubescent troglodytes, writhing around like a bunch of epileptic whores in a strobe light factory…” How fucking weird, yet hilarious, yet surreal, yet pathetic that they reject my perfectly good story and then go and publish my bizarre tirade. Oh well, whatever. At least I finally got published.
I nearly got run over on the way back to the apartment. I was crossing the street toward our place, at the crosswalk with the light in my favor no less, when a convoy of three shiny black unmarked SUVs came screaming through the intersection. I was rereading my piece in Foie Gras again (it grew on me) and didn’t even notice them until they were on top of me. No horns, no sirens, nothing; just strobe lights in their hazards and a blatant disregard for human life. I vigorously gave them the finger as they receded down the street. ‘Fucking cock-wipes!’ I imagined myself screaming at them, ‘Motherfuckers!’ But then I imagined the SUVs stopping and coming back for me. I pictured them jammed full of Blackwater ex-green berets, bristling with high-tech weaponry, probably whisking Dick Cheney off to a brunch meeting. I wondered what would have happened if I’d managed to kick one in the fender as it passed: I’d probably get disappeared down to Guantanamo, that’s what.
It was hot as hell in the apartment, but the electronics hum had gone down several decibels. Nate was sitting sprawled on the peeling linoleum floor of our kitchen, eating Chinese food out of a Styrofoam container. I don’t think I had ever seen Nate eat before. I had always assumed that he stayed so skinny because he spent all his money on cocaine. That and electric bills. But come to think of it, I had never seen Nate do coke either.
“Your friend Michael is here.”
Michael McAsshole is most definitely not my friend. He is my drug dealer, and I think he is genuinely psychotic, and sometimes it amuses him to pretend to be my chum.
“Why did you let him in?” Mike is over six feet tall, with an oversized carrot-topped head, and he is an ex-marine (or so he claims). He is radically antisocial. And he sells me my speed.
“He insisted.” Honestly, I’m not addicted to meth. But how the fuck else am I supposed to write during the day when I have to work all night? Have you ever stood in ankle-deep muck water at four in the morning, wrestling with half inch diameter 7x19 grease-impregnated aircraft cable? Have you ever tried to sit down and write a chapter after doing that for eight hours? Well ok then.
Michael was sprawled out on our couch, his big ugly boots propped up on the pillow, drinking a beer (my beer, and the very last one I had in the fridge too, I thought), toying with a plastic ziplock bag with a bunch of pills in it. He gave me a big shit-eating smile when I walked in. I gave him his eighty bucks. He gave me the baggy. That should have been the end of it. But he just lay there, giving me that weirdo twitchy grin.
“You know,” he said, “I’ve been worried about you.”
Nate’s computer, (that is to say the only one of Nate’s twenty or forty computers that actually had a cover and a cd drive) beeped and ejected a freshly burned cd.
“Excuse me.” Nate slouched into the room and retrieved his cdr from the drive tray. There’s never anything interesting on Nate’s cds, the ones he gets or the ones he mails out. I’ve snooped, looking for porn. All there is is big text files, full of numbers. Math geek stuff. Most definitely not my bag. Nate slipped the cd into a dust jacket and slipped the dust jacket into a padded pre-addressed envelope.
“You know,” Mike went on, draining the last of his (my) beer from the bottle and idly picking up one of Nate’s old cds from the end table, spinning it on his index finger like a frisbee, “I think you’ve got a real problem. I think you’ve been doing way too many drugs.”
Michael does hallucinogens at least three times a week. I think Mike does more drugs than anyone I know.
“I think you should seek out professional help.”
I found myself literally leaping at Mike on the couch. Clutching my baggie in one hand, I brought my mouth to within an inch of his big hairy Irish ear.
“FUUUUCK YOOOOU!!” I screamed.
Time could have stood still, except I could still hear my heart drumming away in my chest. I didn’t know what to expect from Mike. I’d never done anything like that before in my life. He’s a lot bigger than me.
“Um, excuse me,” said Nate, “I’ve ah, got to step outside and mail something… Can I get you anything? While I’m out, can I get you something? A pack of cigarettes?” Usually Nate sends me out to mail his packages, and pays me off with a pack of cigarettes or something.
The door closed behind Nate. I didn’t know what to do. Mike just lay there on the couch, an old data cd balanced on his finger at a crooked angle, looking at me, twitching. An excruciating minute passed. And another. He looked at me. I looked at him. He opened his mouth to say something.
I never found out what he was about to say, because right about then is when they kicked the door in. It was really loud and it all happened really fast. The door crashed open, and about a dozen guys all in black with kevlar flack jackets and black riot helmets with clear plastic visors stormed into the apartment, rushing through the kitchen, scattering dirty dishes in front of them like fall leaves on the wind. Before you could say ‘Habeas Corpus’, they had a black hood over Mike’s head, plastic zip-cuffs around his wrists, and were dragging him back out to wherever they had come from.
I just stood there.
A bunch of guys in spacesuits came along later, and started disassembling Nate’s computers, putting them into clear plastic bags, and hauling them away. They tried to take my Powerbook, but I objected. “Hey, that’s mine.” I said, and they left it alone.
Eventually I got myself a tall cold glass of water and took a pill and settled down to do some writing. The guys in spacesuits were still coming in and out of the apartment, but they were reasonably quiet, so I ignored them. Nate came back later on, looking frazzled, but he didn’t say anything about what was happening, and locked himself in his bedroom for the duration.
Daisy came by a little after nine. She had lust in her heart, a ring on her finger, and a bunch of pills in her pocket. Her breasts were just as big and luscious and inviting as I had imagined. She had a wicked scar on one of her boobs, a long white burn mark, all the way down to the nipple. It was slag, she explained, from back when she used to do a lot of welding. A bit of molten metal had gotten down her shirt and run down her tit and into her bra. It looked like it had been really painful. But at the same time, I thought it looked really sexy, in an odd way.
Her thighs were strong and pale, and she was very wet and ready for me. She tasted nice, not like peaches or anything, but clean, salty and tangy. Real.
I remembered that I had to be at work again in three hours; we had to get those load sensors ironed out. But I knew Joe Blow would cover for me.
End
(c) 2008 first published in thuglit 8/08
The downtown local broke onto the subway platform like a rogue wave, and I was nearly pulled under by the rip tide. I wrapped an arm around an upright steel column, encrusted in decades of tough, brightly colored institutional paint. Someone had started an archeological excavation, exposing a multitude of layers, geological strata, millimeters deep and no sign of the naked underlying steel. Like a coward I crouched in the lee, waiting for the surge to pass. About the only thing I had going for me was that I was headed opposite the commuters on their way to work.
Sometimes I believe I live inside a giant pachinko machine, I swear. I couldn’t decide if it was way too early in the morning or way too late at night.
I felt shaky. Nauseous. Like a shadow on a cloudy day. Too much coffee, my stomach twisted in knots in protest; and the numbing effect of the alcohol was beginning to morph into a splitting headache. I wanted methamphetamines. I wanted valium. I wanted to eat a mile of pussy. I was still technically on the clock.
On a stainless steel edge, I smoothed a crumpled twenty that had until recently lived a solitary existence in the bottom of my blue jeans. I fed it into the slot, and shockingly, the machine accepted it on the first try.
‘Would you like to add money to your MetroCard?’ No. I didn’t have a MetroCard. I wanted to get one. That was the problem. The solution, however, didn’t seem to be revealed on the touch screen. I hit Cancel. ‘How may I help you today?’ No sign of my twenty. ‘Please insert credit card or cash to begin.’ I looked around. The token booth, encased in inch thick plexi, stood empty. ‘Thank you for riding with MTA.’
More Trouble Ahead.
It was going to be a long walk. For a minute I just stood there, looking at the thing. I swear, if a machine could look smug, this one did. I considered digging my ten-inch crescent wrench out of my tool bag and doing a number on its smug little touch screen, but frankly I didn’t have the energy. I sighed, probably too loud and too dramatically, and headed up the urine steps into the morning sun.
Technically I was still on the clock. Technically I should have still been at the bottom of a very deep pit in a very tall building on the walkie-talkie with Joe Blow, trying to dial in load sensors whose manufacture and installation had been botched twenty years ago by a company out of Ohio that no longer existed; but then technically I’m not supposed to drink whiskey at work either and that’s never stopped me, now has it? Seven hours of this shit is more than enough for anyone, certainly more than enough for Joe and me, and the rats in my peripheral vision give me the fucking creeps, and who really gives a shit if we cut out a little early. Not me.
Fuck this, man. It was kind of weird to be out and about this early in the morning. The light was strange. I had this strong paranoid feeling that I was being watched, but I chalked it up caffeine, amphetamine withdrawal and general paranoia. I checked over my shoulder a couple of times nonetheless. Hey, you can’t be too careful. An ounce of prevention is worth a pig in a poke, or something like that.
I picked up the mail on the way up to the apartment. Crap, whole lotta crap. Doctors Without Borders wanted more money. Man, you write them one lousy check and they never leave you alone. What else? Another rejection slip. A cd in a cardboard mailer for Nate. He’d been getting a ton of those lately. The ConEd bill. Christ on a flipping crutch!
“Hey Nate?” If there is one thing I really really cannot stand, will do almost anything to avoid, it is conflict. My share of the electric bill, however, even considering our 60/40 split, currently represented more than the sum of my total liquid assets, and rent was coming due again.
Nate poked his head out of his bedroom. Actually what we call his bedroom is just a sheet of half-inch plywood drywall-screwed into the far end of our railroad studio. It is a bedroom in that it encompasses just enough space for Nate’s futon and in that he sleeps in there. Not that I’ve ever actually known him to sleep.
“The electric bill just came in. It’s for over 900 dollars.” Our power bill had been creeping up for months now. Nate just looked at me. His eyes seemed wobbly. Or maybe it was just me, just that I hadn’t slept in a really really really long time. “And I can’t afford it.”
He blinked, slowly, like a sick and twisted Disney version of an owl. Nate is ridiculously tall, six-four or six-seven or something and has horrible posture and greasy black hair that he neglects to cut. So why does he always remind me of an owl? Maybe it’s the nose. “Don’t worry about it.” he said, “I’ll take care of it.”
“All of it?”
“All of it. Give me the bill. I’ll write them a check.”
Wow, big spender. I handed over the bill. “This came for you too.” I said, passing him the cardboard cd packet.
“Cool.” Nate said, but he was no longer interested in me. He was already loading the cd into the one computer he owns that actually has a cd drive. A couple dozen fans kicked in as sleeping integrated circuits grouchily blinked the cobwebs out of their collective eyes and shook an electronic leg. A nearly subsonic 60-cycle hum grated on my eardrums, and the temperature in the apartment edged up a degree or two.
Over the months, our apartment had been engulfed by a crawling infestation: what might appear to an uneducated layman (i.e. me) to be dozens of crappy old PCs, stripped of their cases and peripherals; and wired together with red, blue, yellow, and green jumper cables. For a while Nate had been paying me (twenty bucks a pop, cash) to pick them up off the street for him, old computers that people were throwing away. Where he gets the money, I have no idea, because he certainly doesn’t have a job and hardly ever leaves the apartment. He is some kind of computer genius- he fixed my pokey old Powerbook up real good, runs faster than brand new now- but we don’t even have our own internet connection. We steal internet (via a homemade tin can high-gain antenna that Nate cooked up from some recipe off the interweb) from the Crazy Lady Coffee Shop across the street that is going to be closed soon because a Starbuck’s just opened up on our block. Nate is clearly a little crazy, but quite frankly that’s the kettle calling the pot black.
It was only ten, but sometimes Daisy can be convinced to open the Good Times a little early; so I took my rejection slip and girded my loins for a nice long wallow. Daisy is a friend, and also happens to be my valium supply, and when she’s in a good mood I can drink for free or half price. And I like looking at her tits. I hadn’t been properly laid in a really long time, and the tension between my legs achieved some kind of cranky equilibrium with the tension between my ears. I really needed to score some meth and do some writing. And now I had an erection.
Honestly, I never do speed at work. I only use it to help me write. Nights I’m an elevator mechanic, days I’m a novelist. Or at least a short story writer. A thus far unpublished short story writer. And I need the valium to mellow out the meth; otherwise I get too jittery.
Daisy was behind the bar, polishing the greasy wood surface with a greasy rag in an earnest display of the futility of the protestant work ethic. The steel gates were still down, but she let me in and set me up with a can of PBR and a shot that took some of the edge off. I told her the story of the thieving MetroCard machine, and she shook her head in sympathy, but didn’t offer me any free Product, so I had to be content to watch her cleavage which jiggled pleasantly under the cut-out collar of a black Iron Maiden t-shirt. Daisy’s got a bit of a gut, but frankly I didn’t really mind that at all. What she has got is a really cute set of tits that I wouldn’t mind having a closer look at if it weren’t for that damn ring on that damn finger of her left hand. I wouldn’t mind, not one bit.
Feeling sufficiently insulated, or just fatalistic, I tore open the rejection slip. It was from one of your more pretentious literary journals, a story I had sent in months and months ago, and more or less given up on every hearing back on.
Is it possible to hallucinate a complete page of text? I think that it probably is; and my head was in the kind of state that I assumed that was exactly what was going on. Holy shit. I killed my PBR and reread the letter that wasn’t even a form letter.
My rejection slip wasn’t. It was a congratulatory note, an acceptance letter. I read it again. Foie Gras Journal was happy to publish my fresh and wryly humorous piece. There was to be no payment of course, not even a complimentary issue, cocksuckers, but still. I realized that I was grinning. Daisy landed another ice cold can in front of me, and I slapped five dollars down on the bar. She looked surprised.
“I just got published,” I explained, unable to wipe the big goofy grin off my face.
“Congratulations,” she deadpanned, pocketing the five. “When? Where?”
I scanned the letter for a date. Over a month ago. Slackers. But that meant that the current issue, the only issue that mattered, my issue, should already be out.
“I’ve got to go,” I said, standing up and taking a big cold fizzy swallow of beer. And then on impulse: “Hey, what are you doing later on, after you get off work?”
She looked at me a little funny. “I don’t know. Depends.”
“Do you want to come over to my house?” I felt hot and realized that I was blushing. I’ve always sucked at asking girls out. As a matter of fact, I can’t remember the last time I actually asked a girl out. Possibly in junior high school. The deepest pit in hell, half the reason I’m so freaking maladjusted. “Like, do you want to come over and hang out?” I sounded like a complete asshole.
“I don’t know… if my husband found out…”
“What time is your shift over?”
“Nine.”
“Do you want to meet me over there?”
“Sure.”
I gave her our address and left, feeling like I’d just robbed a bank. Nobody ever told me it was THAT easy!
I was headed up to the St. Mark’s bookstore, the best and only place I know of to get obscure pretentious literary journals. On the way over, some yuppie woman gave me the evil eye for flicking my cigarette butt onto the sidewalk, and I gave her such a look that she stopped in mid scold and took a step backward. I was King of the World.
Made my way to the rack in the back where they sell the indie rags. It took me a minute to locate it, but there it was, the latest issue of Foie Gras; shiny and new. I can’t believe they didn’t even give me a free copy. Cheap fucks. I ponied up my thirteen bucks (thirteen bucks?!) and hit the street.
As I worked my way south and east, I flipped through the magazine. There I was, right there in the table of contents, my name in somebody else’s ten point black Helvetica. Of course they had mangled the title, but whatever. I paged through the journal (I can’t believe the crap they publish) not wanting, I suppose, to appear too eager to get to my own story. (Appear to whom? I have really got to get some sleep.) About midway through, there it was, next to a poem about a boyfriend some chick had had when she had been a councilor at some summer camp. I pulled up to a convenient standpipe and started to read:
Dear Douchebags,
My hands are shaking with disgust, making it hard to type. Your pathetic excuse for a lame-ass fucking joke of a so-called literary journal fucking blows. It is literally worthless: I wiped my ass with it and got a fucking paper cut. I can’t believe you so-called editors are wasting perfectly good air with your pathetic respiration. Why don’t you do humanity a favor and donate your fucking worthless organs to charity? I mean there are poor villages in Guatemala that could use your shriveled undersized testicles and livers. Give me a fucking break…
And so on, for almost four pages. I realized as I read the first sentence that this was not the story I had sent them something like nine months ago: this was the follow-up letter I had sent them after not hearing back from them at all after six months. I’d just banged it out and dumped it in the mail. I’d never even worked up a second draft. Reading it critically now, I wondered if maybe I shouldn’t back off a tad on the methamphetamines when writing. “Goddamn prepubescent troglodytes, writhing around like a bunch of epileptic whores in a strobe light factory…” How fucking weird, yet hilarious, yet surreal, yet pathetic that they reject my perfectly good story and then go and publish my bizarre tirade. Oh well, whatever. At least I finally got published.
I nearly got run over on the way back to the apartment. I was crossing the street toward our place, at the crosswalk with the light in my favor no less, when a convoy of three shiny black unmarked SUVs came screaming through the intersection. I was rereading my piece in Foie Gras again (it grew on me) and didn’t even notice them until they were on top of me. No horns, no sirens, nothing; just strobe lights in their hazards and a blatant disregard for human life. I vigorously gave them the finger as they receded down the street. ‘Fucking cock-wipes!’ I imagined myself screaming at them, ‘Motherfuckers!’ But then I imagined the SUVs stopping and coming back for me. I pictured them jammed full of Blackwater ex-green berets, bristling with high-tech weaponry, probably whisking Dick Cheney off to a brunch meeting. I wondered what would have happened if I’d managed to kick one in the fender as it passed: I’d probably get disappeared down to Guantanamo, that’s what.
It was hot as hell in the apartment, but the electronics hum had gone down several decibels. Nate was sitting sprawled on the peeling linoleum floor of our kitchen, eating Chinese food out of a Styrofoam container. I don’t think I had ever seen Nate eat before. I had always assumed that he stayed so skinny because he spent all his money on cocaine. That and electric bills. But come to think of it, I had never seen Nate do coke either.
“Your friend Michael is here.”
Michael McAsshole is most definitely not my friend. He is my drug dealer, and I think he is genuinely psychotic, and sometimes it amuses him to pretend to be my chum.
“Why did you let him in?” Mike is over six feet tall, with an oversized carrot-topped head, and he is an ex-marine (or so he claims). He is radically antisocial. And he sells me my speed.
“He insisted.” Honestly, I’m not addicted to meth. But how the fuck else am I supposed to write during the day when I have to work all night? Have you ever stood in ankle-deep muck water at four in the morning, wrestling with half inch diameter 7x19 grease-impregnated aircraft cable? Have you ever tried to sit down and write a chapter after doing that for eight hours? Well ok then.
Michael was sprawled out on our couch, his big ugly boots propped up on the pillow, drinking a beer (my beer, and the very last one I had in the fridge too, I thought), toying with a plastic ziplock bag with a bunch of pills in it. He gave me a big shit-eating smile when I walked in. I gave him his eighty bucks. He gave me the baggy. That should have been the end of it. But he just lay there, giving me that weirdo twitchy grin.
“You know,” he said, “I’ve been worried about you.”
Nate’s computer, (that is to say the only one of Nate’s twenty or forty computers that actually had a cover and a cd drive) beeped and ejected a freshly burned cd.
“Excuse me.” Nate slouched into the room and retrieved his cdr from the drive tray. There’s never anything interesting on Nate’s cds, the ones he gets or the ones he mails out. I’ve snooped, looking for porn. All there is is big text files, full of numbers. Math geek stuff. Most definitely not my bag. Nate slipped the cd into a dust jacket and slipped the dust jacket into a padded pre-addressed envelope.
“You know,” Mike went on, draining the last of his (my) beer from the bottle and idly picking up one of Nate’s old cds from the end table, spinning it on his index finger like a frisbee, “I think you’ve got a real problem. I think you’ve been doing way too many drugs.”
Michael does hallucinogens at least three times a week. I think Mike does more drugs than anyone I know.
“I think you should seek out professional help.”
I found myself literally leaping at Mike on the couch. Clutching my baggie in one hand, I brought my mouth to within an inch of his big hairy Irish ear.
“FUUUUCK YOOOOU!!” I screamed.
Time could have stood still, except I could still hear my heart drumming away in my chest. I didn’t know what to expect from Mike. I’d never done anything like that before in my life. He’s a lot bigger than me.
“Um, excuse me,” said Nate, “I’ve ah, got to step outside and mail something… Can I get you anything? While I’m out, can I get you something? A pack of cigarettes?” Usually Nate sends me out to mail his packages, and pays me off with a pack of cigarettes or something.
The door closed behind Nate. I didn’t know what to do. Mike just lay there on the couch, an old data cd balanced on his finger at a crooked angle, looking at me, twitching. An excruciating minute passed. And another. He looked at me. I looked at him. He opened his mouth to say something.
I never found out what he was about to say, because right about then is when they kicked the door in. It was really loud and it all happened really fast. The door crashed open, and about a dozen guys all in black with kevlar flack jackets and black riot helmets with clear plastic visors stormed into the apartment, rushing through the kitchen, scattering dirty dishes in front of them like fall leaves on the wind. Before you could say ‘Habeas Corpus’, they had a black hood over Mike’s head, plastic zip-cuffs around his wrists, and were dragging him back out to wherever they had come from.
I just stood there.
A bunch of guys in spacesuits came along later, and started disassembling Nate’s computers, putting them into clear plastic bags, and hauling them away. They tried to take my Powerbook, but I objected. “Hey, that’s mine.” I said, and they left it alone.
Eventually I got myself a tall cold glass of water and took a pill and settled down to do some writing. The guys in spacesuits were still coming in and out of the apartment, but they were reasonably quiet, so I ignored them. Nate came back later on, looking frazzled, but he didn’t say anything about what was happening, and locked himself in his bedroom for the duration.
Daisy came by a little after nine. She had lust in her heart, a ring on her finger, and a bunch of pills in her pocket. Her breasts were just as big and luscious and inviting as I had imagined. She had a wicked scar on one of her boobs, a long white burn mark, all the way down to the nipple. It was slag, she explained, from back when she used to do a lot of welding. A bit of molten metal had gotten down her shirt and run down her tit and into her bra. It looked like it had been really painful. But at the same time, I thought it looked really sexy, in an odd way.
Her thighs were strong and pale, and she was very wet and ready for me. She tasted nice, not like peaches or anything, but clean, salty and tangy. Real.
I remembered that I had to be at work again in three hours; we had to get those load sensors ironed out. But I knew Joe Blow would cover for me.
End
(c) 2008 first published in thuglit 8/08
Tuesday, January 6, 2009
Put All Your Money In The Bag I Have A Gun
I don’t know what the fuck to do about this thing going on in my mouth.
The cavity feels like Lake Freaking Tahoe, but the lump on the gum line is what I am worried about right at this moment. It started acting up three or four days ago, and at this point it feels like an electric robin’s egg. It hurts. Varies from an insistent ache to a nagging throb, with the odd agonizing jolt thrown in there for variety. Advil doesn’t do dick. Lately it’s been making me feel dizzy at work. And dizzy is a lousy thing for an ironworker to be feeling.
I am an ironworker, in the sense that for the last two years I have been more or less steadily employed erecting the steel skeletons of future condominiums. I am not an ironworker in the sense that I am not in the ironworker’s union, and therefore I do not have any health insurance. Or more to the point right at this instant, dental insurance. I haven’t been to a dentist in I am embarrassed to say how many years now. A deeply seated fear of all things dental combined with chronic poverty is a great recipe for not getting your annual checkup. So if I go to a dentist, which I can’t by any means afford to do, the odds are pretty good that he is going to tell me that I need thousands and thousands of dollars’ worth of work done to my mouth. I can barely afford to pay the rent this month, and my student loans are teetering on the edge of default. I don’t need the lecture and ain’t got the cash.
I feel like shit. I was drinking beer last night, down at the Good Times Saloon. Beer is terrible for you when you’ve got an infection. I should have been drinking something stronger. Gin, whiskey, something high proof. But beggars can’t be choosers, and I’ve been dragging ass all day long.
I extract myself from the subway, and climb the piss-stairs up into the world of light. I think better when I am walking. Something has got to give. The thing has grown to the size of a golf ball, feels like it is growing by the minute. The right side of my face is visibly swollen and puffy.
I pick up a blank deposit slip from the little island in the lobby and carefully print on it, in black Sharpie, the words:
PUT ALL YOUR MONEY IN THE BAG I HAVE A GUN.
This could be the answer to all my dental woes. I keep one hand balled up in a fist in my jacket pocket. I have never fired a weapon before in my life. I look around at the cashiers behind their walls of plexi, the loan officers at their tidy desks, and gingerly probe my hollow molar with the tip of my tongue.
When was the last time I was in a bank? I remember before there were ATMs you had to go to the bank every time you got a paycheck. What a pain in the ass that was! You had to stand in line and then deal with some fucking teller who would look at you like you were a criminal and didn’t want to believe that your own signature belonged to you. I make $20 an hour, cash under the table, and I normally do my utmost to avoid interacting with any institution more respectable than a bar or an occasional grocery store.
It’s nearly closing time. People are looking at me, thinking what the hell is HE doing in here? People go to the bank to set up IRAs, to invest in mutual funds, to get approved for mortgages and stuff like that. I am not the kind of person who looks like he is going to be doing any of these things. It feels like everyone is looking at me, wondering if I’m here to rob the fucking place. Well the joke’s on them. I am here to rob the fucking place. Just not today. I wad up the deposit slip and shove it deep into the front pocket of my jeans. I need a little time to think this over.
I’m a lousy criminal. The total extent of my criminal career (if you don’t count all the acid I dropped in high school) was getting arrested in Maine for driving with a suspended New York license when I was unemployed and living in my car and couldn’t afford insurance. Oh, and then stealing somebody’s license plates so that I could drive my illegal car back down to New York so I could then ditch it in North Jersey and get a job as a non-union ironworker in Brooklyn. I was pissing vinegar all the way down too, believe you me.
Back at my apartment, which is a crappy one room studio with a shared bathroom at the end of the hall in a crappy building in what used to be a crappy neighborhood in Brooklyn, but is now getting all posh on me with lesbians with baby strollers and non-Starbucks type cappuccino joints opening up all over the place. The time has come for decisive action.
I mix up a nice cocktail of equal parts hydrogen peroxide and water and gargle with the solution over and over. I squish the stuff through my mouth, running it between my teeth like mouthwash. Then I get out my Spyderco, my serrated rigger’s knife. Some of the teeth are broken off, but the tip’s still good, and it should do the trick. I turn on a burner and hold the blade over the blue flame until I’m pretty sure that it must be sterile. Then I pad down the hall to the bathroom with the knife in one hand and the bottle of hydrogen peroxide in the other, and lock the door behind me. Oh God. What if I fucking die doing this? I unlock the door. Oh God. What if someone walks in on me doing this? I lock the door again.
Looking in the mirror, I open my mouth wide. The lump is right there on the gum line, upper right, big as a freaking billiards ball. The trick is not to try to think in terms of the mirror reversing left and right. Just stick that knife where it needs to go.
Fucking Punk Rock Dentist, Yeah Howdy!
I guide the tip of the knife to the swollen abscess. It’s like touching a red hot wire to an over-inflated balloon. A balloon over-inflated with rancid pus. The thing is all pink and marbled, looks disturbingly like raw bacon. As soon as the tip of the knife touches it, the swollen bump bursts, instantly filling my mouth with foul tasting goop. I would be disgusted, except that the sense of relief is physically overwhelming. It hurts like a motherfucker, and I double over, grasping the sink with both hands. I spit out all I can, then rinse with peroxide. Instantly it foams up, filling my mouth and leaking out the sides. Looking in the mirror, I see a mad dog. You handsome dog you. I smile a grim little smile at the rough looking self in the mirror, and rinse and rinse until all the foaming stops.
I’m half an hour late to work the next morning, but nobody says nothing. They all knew about my mouth. I swear some of those troglodytes were just waiting to auction off my tools. Batso had offered to loan me some cash to go to a dentist, but I wasn’t about to take his money. The guy has a kid to support.
Later on, me and Batso are six stories up, sitting on a piece of W-6 that is falling out five-eighths of an inch low. That sucks because the holes don’t overlap so you can’t get a spike in to pry it up. It sucks because you can’t drill new holes because the new holes would fall out right on top of the old ones, and besides that would mean that this stick is out by five-eighths, and we do have our standards.
We have rigged up a leverhoist to the beam above us. The hook end of the leverhoist is choked around the W-6 I-beam we are sitting on. When I crank the leverhoist up, our beam should raise into place, and Batso is ready with a bullpin and a five pound sledge to make those fucking holes line up.
Batso takes out his customary little brown bottle of amyl nitrite and takes his customary whiff. He ritually offers me a hit and I ritually decline. I don’t do anything stronger at work than a one-hitter in the morning and a couple beers at lunch. We are a good seventy feet above the sidewalk and there is a stiff gusty breeze coming off the East River, and this Punk Rock Dentist has a healthy sense of self-preservation.
I work the handle of the leverhoist. It comes along easy at first, but then it gets hard as it starts to feel the weight of the beam. The ratcheting device is good for two tons. Click by click, the beam is moving visibly up under our asses. It is unnerving to feel the steel shift beneath us. I’ve never really gotten comfortable with being up high like this. Not comfortable the way some of the guys are. It’s a little too close to being dead for my taste. Now we can see light through the prepunched holes. Finally Batso can get the end of his bullpin in. He stands on the six inch wide ribbon of steel, grinning like a mad man, and beats it home with the sledgehammer. At last I can get a bolt made. We lock the nut down with our spudwrenches. One time I dropped a structural nut from thirteen stories up. It took out the windshield of a parked Lexus real nice. I never heard back about that one. Sometimes you get lucky.
I run my tongue over the spot where yesterday there was a festering golfball sized abscess. It feels fine. Batso does another hit of amyl nitrite. I take the deposit slip out of the front pocket of my filthy work jeans and crumple it up into a little ball. I toss it off the side toward the street, where it perversely falls up instead of down, finding wings, dancing away on the wind until I can no longer see it. Sometimes you do get lucky.
End
(c) 2008
first published in 3 am magazine 6/8/2008
The cavity feels like Lake Freaking Tahoe, but the lump on the gum line is what I am worried about right at this moment. It started acting up three or four days ago, and at this point it feels like an electric robin’s egg. It hurts. Varies from an insistent ache to a nagging throb, with the odd agonizing jolt thrown in there for variety. Advil doesn’t do dick. Lately it’s been making me feel dizzy at work. And dizzy is a lousy thing for an ironworker to be feeling.
I am an ironworker, in the sense that for the last two years I have been more or less steadily employed erecting the steel skeletons of future condominiums. I am not an ironworker in the sense that I am not in the ironworker’s union, and therefore I do not have any health insurance. Or more to the point right at this instant, dental insurance. I haven’t been to a dentist in I am embarrassed to say how many years now. A deeply seated fear of all things dental combined with chronic poverty is a great recipe for not getting your annual checkup. So if I go to a dentist, which I can’t by any means afford to do, the odds are pretty good that he is going to tell me that I need thousands and thousands of dollars’ worth of work done to my mouth. I can barely afford to pay the rent this month, and my student loans are teetering on the edge of default. I don’t need the lecture and ain’t got the cash.
I feel like shit. I was drinking beer last night, down at the Good Times Saloon. Beer is terrible for you when you’ve got an infection. I should have been drinking something stronger. Gin, whiskey, something high proof. But beggars can’t be choosers, and I’ve been dragging ass all day long.
I extract myself from the subway, and climb the piss-stairs up into the world of light. I think better when I am walking. Something has got to give. The thing has grown to the size of a golf ball, feels like it is growing by the minute. The right side of my face is visibly swollen and puffy.
I pick up a blank deposit slip from the little island in the lobby and carefully print on it, in black Sharpie, the words:
PUT ALL YOUR MONEY IN THE BAG I HAVE A GUN.
This could be the answer to all my dental woes. I keep one hand balled up in a fist in my jacket pocket. I have never fired a weapon before in my life. I look around at the cashiers behind their walls of plexi, the loan officers at their tidy desks, and gingerly probe my hollow molar with the tip of my tongue.
When was the last time I was in a bank? I remember before there were ATMs you had to go to the bank every time you got a paycheck. What a pain in the ass that was! You had to stand in line and then deal with some fucking teller who would look at you like you were a criminal and didn’t want to believe that your own signature belonged to you. I make $20 an hour, cash under the table, and I normally do my utmost to avoid interacting with any institution more respectable than a bar or an occasional grocery store.
It’s nearly closing time. People are looking at me, thinking what the hell is HE doing in here? People go to the bank to set up IRAs, to invest in mutual funds, to get approved for mortgages and stuff like that. I am not the kind of person who looks like he is going to be doing any of these things. It feels like everyone is looking at me, wondering if I’m here to rob the fucking place. Well the joke’s on them. I am here to rob the fucking place. Just not today. I wad up the deposit slip and shove it deep into the front pocket of my jeans. I need a little time to think this over.
I’m a lousy criminal. The total extent of my criminal career (if you don’t count all the acid I dropped in high school) was getting arrested in Maine for driving with a suspended New York license when I was unemployed and living in my car and couldn’t afford insurance. Oh, and then stealing somebody’s license plates so that I could drive my illegal car back down to New York so I could then ditch it in North Jersey and get a job as a non-union ironworker in Brooklyn. I was pissing vinegar all the way down too, believe you me.
Back at my apartment, which is a crappy one room studio with a shared bathroom at the end of the hall in a crappy building in what used to be a crappy neighborhood in Brooklyn, but is now getting all posh on me with lesbians with baby strollers and non-Starbucks type cappuccino joints opening up all over the place. The time has come for decisive action.
I mix up a nice cocktail of equal parts hydrogen peroxide and water and gargle with the solution over and over. I squish the stuff through my mouth, running it between my teeth like mouthwash. Then I get out my Spyderco, my serrated rigger’s knife. Some of the teeth are broken off, but the tip’s still good, and it should do the trick. I turn on a burner and hold the blade over the blue flame until I’m pretty sure that it must be sterile. Then I pad down the hall to the bathroom with the knife in one hand and the bottle of hydrogen peroxide in the other, and lock the door behind me. Oh God. What if I fucking die doing this? I unlock the door. Oh God. What if someone walks in on me doing this? I lock the door again.
Looking in the mirror, I open my mouth wide. The lump is right there on the gum line, upper right, big as a freaking billiards ball. The trick is not to try to think in terms of the mirror reversing left and right. Just stick that knife where it needs to go.
Fucking Punk Rock Dentist, Yeah Howdy!
I guide the tip of the knife to the swollen abscess. It’s like touching a red hot wire to an over-inflated balloon. A balloon over-inflated with rancid pus. The thing is all pink and marbled, looks disturbingly like raw bacon. As soon as the tip of the knife touches it, the swollen bump bursts, instantly filling my mouth with foul tasting goop. I would be disgusted, except that the sense of relief is physically overwhelming. It hurts like a motherfucker, and I double over, grasping the sink with both hands. I spit out all I can, then rinse with peroxide. Instantly it foams up, filling my mouth and leaking out the sides. Looking in the mirror, I see a mad dog. You handsome dog you. I smile a grim little smile at the rough looking self in the mirror, and rinse and rinse until all the foaming stops.
I’m half an hour late to work the next morning, but nobody says nothing. They all knew about my mouth. I swear some of those troglodytes were just waiting to auction off my tools. Batso had offered to loan me some cash to go to a dentist, but I wasn’t about to take his money. The guy has a kid to support.
Later on, me and Batso are six stories up, sitting on a piece of W-6 that is falling out five-eighths of an inch low. That sucks because the holes don’t overlap so you can’t get a spike in to pry it up. It sucks because you can’t drill new holes because the new holes would fall out right on top of the old ones, and besides that would mean that this stick is out by five-eighths, and we do have our standards.
We have rigged up a leverhoist to the beam above us. The hook end of the leverhoist is choked around the W-6 I-beam we are sitting on. When I crank the leverhoist up, our beam should raise into place, and Batso is ready with a bullpin and a five pound sledge to make those fucking holes line up.
Batso takes out his customary little brown bottle of amyl nitrite and takes his customary whiff. He ritually offers me a hit and I ritually decline. I don’t do anything stronger at work than a one-hitter in the morning and a couple beers at lunch. We are a good seventy feet above the sidewalk and there is a stiff gusty breeze coming off the East River, and this Punk Rock Dentist has a healthy sense of self-preservation.
I work the handle of the leverhoist. It comes along easy at first, but then it gets hard as it starts to feel the weight of the beam. The ratcheting device is good for two tons. Click by click, the beam is moving visibly up under our asses. It is unnerving to feel the steel shift beneath us. I’ve never really gotten comfortable with being up high like this. Not comfortable the way some of the guys are. It’s a little too close to being dead for my taste. Now we can see light through the prepunched holes. Finally Batso can get the end of his bullpin in. He stands on the six inch wide ribbon of steel, grinning like a mad man, and beats it home with the sledgehammer. At last I can get a bolt made. We lock the nut down with our spudwrenches. One time I dropped a structural nut from thirteen stories up. It took out the windshield of a parked Lexus real nice. I never heard back about that one. Sometimes you get lucky.
I run my tongue over the spot where yesterday there was a festering golfball sized abscess. It feels fine. Batso does another hit of amyl nitrite. I take the deposit slip out of the front pocket of my filthy work jeans and crumple it up into a little ball. I toss it off the side toward the street, where it perversely falls up instead of down, finding wings, dancing away on the wind until I can no longer see it. Sometimes you do get lucky.
End
(c) 2008
first published in 3 am magazine 6/8/2008
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